[Groop] [Haiku] Chakaal

[Grossmann, Gary (DOR)]

I do not know why

My message had dumb spacing

Was not sent that way

 

 

 

 

From: groop-bounces at groo.com [mailto:groop-bounces at groo.com] On Behalf
Of Grossmann, Gary (DOR)
Sent: Wednesday, March 31, 2010 12:37 PM
To: groop at groo.com
Subject: Re: [Groop] [Haiku] Chakaal

 

How about this one:  

Chakaal: Heroic

Beautiful, Intelligent.

Completely Un-Groo

 

I'm not sure about the last line.  I toyed with "Opposite of Groo"  "The
Reverse of Groo" and a couple others...  Oh, wait!  I haven't written
this in Haiku-ese!  

Not sure of last line

Toyed with several others

Still unsatisfied

Gary P. Grossmann

Signing off with a Haiku

May have gone too far

-----Original Message-----
From: groop-bounces at groo.com [mailto:groop-bounces at groo.com] On Behalf
Of Chris Emmett
Sent: Wednesday, March 31, 2010 12:07 PM
To: groop at groo.com
Subject: [Groop] [Haiku] Chakaal

Chakaal, beautiful

Warrior lady. Saving

The world from evil.

 

      

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